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Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote)
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RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote)
November 1, 2013 at 8:59 am
I got to the second line and stopped because it's a sentence fragment. Consider working on your craft. It doesn't matter how good your concepts might be if your craft is bad.
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Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by Lemonvariable72 - October 31, 2013 at 11:34 pm
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by Cinjin - November 1, 2013 at 12:49 am
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by Sejanus - November 1, 2013 at 12:56 am
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by Cinjin - November 1, 2013 at 1:53 am
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by Fruity - November 1, 2013 at 1:33 am
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by Fruity - November 1, 2013 at 2:23 am
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by John V - November 1, 2013 at 8:59 am
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by Paraselene - November 1, 2013 at 11:00 am
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by John V - November 1, 2013 at 11:13 am
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by John V - November 1, 2013 at 11:26 am
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by Faith No More - November 1, 2013 at 11:37 am
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by John V - November 1, 2013 at 11:44 am
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by Faith No More - November 1, 2013 at 11:48 am
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by John V - November 1, 2013 at 12:00 pm
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by Walking Void - November 1, 2013 at 1:23 pm
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by Minimalist - November 1, 2013 at 1:28 pm
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by max-greece - November 1, 2013 at 1:48 pm

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