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Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote)
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RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote)
(November 1, 2013 at 8:59 am)John V Wrote: I got to the second line and stopped because it's a sentence fragment. Consider working on your craft. It doesn't matter how good your concepts might be if your craft is bad.

Could you be more specific, because what you point to doesn't look like a fragment to me.
To-morrow, and to-morrow, and to-morrow,
Creeps in this petty pace from day to day,
To the last syllable of recorded time;
And all our yesterdays have lighted fools
The way to dusty death. Out, out, brief candle!
Life's but a walking shadow, a poor player,
That struts and frets his hour upon the stage,
And then is heard no more. It is a tale
Told by an idiot, full of sound and fury,
Signifying nothing.
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Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by Lemonvariable72 - October 31, 2013 at 11:34 pm
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by Cinjin - November 1, 2013 at 12:49 am
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by Sejanus - November 1, 2013 at 12:56 am
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by Cinjin - November 1, 2013 at 1:53 am
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by Fruity - November 1, 2013 at 1:33 am
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by Fruity - November 1, 2013 at 2:23 am
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by John V - November 1, 2013 at 8:59 am
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by Lemonvariable72 - November 1, 2013 at 10:57 am
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by Silver - November 1, 2013 at 11:00 am
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by John V - November 1, 2013 at 11:13 am
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by John V - November 1, 2013 at 11:26 am
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by Faith No More - November 1, 2013 at 11:37 am
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by John V - November 1, 2013 at 11:44 am
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by Faith No More - November 1, 2013 at 11:48 am
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by John V - November 1, 2013 at 12:00 pm
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by Walking Void - November 1, 2013 at 1:23 pm
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by Minimalist - November 1, 2013 at 1:28 pm
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by max-greece - November 1, 2013 at 1:48 pm

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