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Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote)
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RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote)
(November 1, 2013 at 11:26 am)John V Wrote: Note that sentence fragments can be used in fiction, but such use must be infrequent, and can't be early in the book.

Could you elaborate on the part in bold?
Even if the open windows of science at first make us shiver after the cozy indoor warmth of traditional humanizing myths, in the end the fresh air brings vigor, and the great spaces have a splendor of their own - Bertrand Russell
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Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by Lemonvariable72 - October 31, 2013 at 11:34 pm
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by Cinjin - November 1, 2013 at 12:49 am
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by Sejanus - November 1, 2013 at 12:56 am
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by Cinjin - November 1, 2013 at 1:53 am
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by Fruity - November 1, 2013 at 1:33 am
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by Fruity - November 1, 2013 at 2:23 am
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by John V - November 1, 2013 at 8:59 am
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by Silver - November 1, 2013 at 11:00 am
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by John V - November 1, 2013 at 11:13 am
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by John V - November 1, 2013 at 11:26 am
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by Faith No More - November 1, 2013 at 11:37 am
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by John V - November 1, 2013 at 11:44 am
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by Faith No More - November 1, 2013 at 11:48 am
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by John V - November 1, 2013 at 12:00 pm
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by Walking Void - November 1, 2013 at 1:23 pm
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by Minimalist - November 1, 2013 at 1:28 pm
RE: Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) - by max-greece - November 1, 2013 at 1:48 pm

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