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RE: What's everyone up to right now?
October 10, 2014 at 8:13 pm
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(October 10, 2014 at 4:39 am)Esquilax Wrote: Buh. My last experience with a professional editor- while very educational and I don't regret it in the least- has left me lacking in confidence over whether my character conflicts come across as flighty and indecisive, rather than split between two options. So now I'm constantly second guessing myself with regards to the heroine of book number two; she's supposed to be torn between seeing more of her potential dom, or getting frightened off, but does it come across that way? 
This is the way writer's block is forged. Just thought I'd have a bitchfest here about it, anyway. 
Sorry to hear that. Do you have beta readers or a writing group that could help point you in the right direction or give you feed back?
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RE: What's everyone up to right now?
October 10, 2014 at 8:37 pm
(October 10, 2014 at 5:44 pm)ShaMan Wrote: decoding page after page of ironic hypocrisy. Finding that those who are most condescending are also the quickest to label others that very thing.
Good riddance, asshole.
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RE: What's everyone up to right now?
October 10, 2014 at 10:58 pm
Relaxing, texting, had a friend stop over, and now reading the forums. No meeting friends for drinks tonight...relaxing is underrated.
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RE: What's everyone up to right now?
October 10, 2014 at 11:20 pm
What happened to Shaman?
Anyone know?
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RE: What's everyone up to right now?
October 10, 2014 at 11:22 pm
I thought you hd him for a little lunch.
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RE: What's everyone up to right now?
October 11, 2014 at 12:24 am
(October 10, 2014 at 8:13 pm)Clueless Morgan Wrote: Sorry to hear that. Do you have beta readers or a writing group that could help point you in the right direction or give you feed back?
Yeah, I do, and they generally steer me right. It's just a more painstaking process, having to write for a general audience, because I need to be much clearer than I'm used to being for myself and people that know me. Gotta spell everything out, apparently.
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RE: What's everyone up to right now?
October 11, 2014 at 12:36 am
Watching F1 practice from Sochi, which I didn't realize had a track. Looks quite interesting.
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RE: What's everyone up to right now?
October 11, 2014 at 1:07 am
(October 10, 2014 at 2:34 pm)rexbeccarox Wrote: (October 9, 2014 at 11:21 pm)Brakeman Wrote: Thank you for the kind words. I'm really a bit puzzled with the women of AF.
I was fortunate to live in the university setting for many years so I grew accustom to women of intelligence and ambition. I can see where yourself and Clueless could intimidate non-college guys, but why would you care about that anyway? If you find a nice guy that's cute, let me talk some sense into him..
I thought I found one, but he turned out to be the dickhead of the century...
Thanks, though. I might take you up on that one!
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RE: What's everyone up to right now?
October 11, 2014 at 2:37 am
Waking up for lunch. Been working extra hours for a build out.
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RE: What's everyone up to right now?
October 11, 2014 at 11:09 pm
Excited because I just had my second foster dog adopted. She was older and had a couple of behavioral issues that we worked through, feels like a triumph! A little older couple is the perfect match! I am very happy. I thought I would have this dog forever!
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