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Age of Oblivion - my (hopefully) first full novel.
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RE: Age of Oblivion - my (hopefully) first full novel.
Appreciate it Uncle K. Expect roughly 542 questions in your inbox by noon tomorrow :3 (j/k).

But yeah, glad you enjoy it, tweaks aside. I've always loved the freedom and escapism that sci-gi brings - to build my own universe is so much fun Big Grin
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RE: Age of Oblivion - my (hopefully) first full novel.
Bring it on, the little one keeps me awake anyhow.
The fool hath said in his heart, There is a God. They are corrupt, they have done abominable works, there is none that doeth good.
Psalm 14, KJV revised edition

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RE: Age of Oblivion - my (hopefully) first full novel.
My sympathies.

Incomiiiing!!
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RE: Age of Oblivion - my (hopefully) first full novel.
I'm not good communicating in writing so I'm always amazed with people who can. Keep it up. Great start!
I don't have an anger problem, I have an idiot problem.
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RE: Age of Oblivion - my (hopefully) first full novel.
The monster, the enemy, the star collapsing... Ftl drive.
So many goodies. So much action.
Why is the apparent hero a "monster"?
How is a monster so highly athletic and psychologically tuned? Not to mention that he can use gadgets made for his captors and fly a space ship... How? Is he like the hulk meets cap America?
Why are those enemies blasting a doomed planet? Such waste...
Are the captors and the enemies the same species? Is the monster one of then, too, but somehow altered?
Or are we talking weird forehead aliens, like star trek?
The sol system seems to be some sort of reference in this universe, so are we to expect humans?

Techno babble nerdy stuff thing: is that a warp drive, hyperspace navigation or simple instantaneous wormhole faster-than-light travelling? Or what?

Also, there seems to be a typo on 'breath' before the monster resurfaces for the first time... Maybe you mean 'breathe'?


Just one more question: well you keep the monster alive if I ask when can we read some more??
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RE: Age of Oblivion - my (hopefully) first full novel.
(August 13, 2015 at 7:02 pm)pocaracas Wrote: The monster, the enemy, the star collapsing... Ftl drive.
So many goodies. So much action.
Why is the apparent hero a "monster"?
How is a monster so highly athletic and psychologically tuned? Not to mention that he can use gadgets made for his captors and fly a space ship... How? Is he like the hulk meets cap America?
Why are those enemies blasting a doomed planet? Such waste...
Are the captors and the enemies the same species? Is the monster one of then, too, but somehow altered?
Or are we talking weird forehead aliens, like star trek?
The sol system seems to be some sort of reference in this universe, so are we to expect humans?

Techno babble nerdy stuff thing: is that a warp drive, hyperspace navigation or simple instantaneous wormhole faster-than-light travelling? Or what?

Also, there seems to be a typo on 'breath' before the monster resurfaces for the first time... Maybe you mean 'breathe'?


Just one more question: well you keep the monster alive if I ask when can we read some more??

Thanks poca! As to your questions...

All will be revealed! *Waves arms around in a vaguely wizard-like fashion then gives up because he looks like a twat* Tongue

EDIT: I can answer one question now as it's not spoilery - the Arcdrive is essentially a hyper drive, but I wanted the universe to have as original a feel as possible. In 200,000 years, such names for things may well have been forgotten, so entirely new ones are created. At least that's my in-universe explanation for it.
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