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Statue of Zeus of Olympia (a poem video by me)
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RE: Statue of Zeus of Olympia (a poem video by me)
November 22, 2017 at 3:41 pm
(November 22, 2017 at 3:33 pm)J a c k Wrote:
(November 22, 2017 at 3:29 pm)The Valkyrie Wrote: Wow!

Seriously.

Loved it!

Thanks, Beccs.  Heart

And everyone. . I might post another this weekend.

Make sure you do, I'll stay indoors Wink
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RE: Statue of Zeus of Olympia (a poem video by me)
November 23, 2017 at 3:13 am (This post was last modified: November 23, 2017 at 3:17 am by WinterHold.)
Stone doesn't move; or so people thought until that statue moved.
Twisting its neck, into the dark it looks rumbling the place from floor to roof
The statue might be of stone; but who ever said that stone never cracks?
They always crack with water or plants; they move; so hear me, J A C K.
That poem was art. Beautiful, charming, splendid and fine.
And you were the wind that gave stone a heart;  and blossomed flowers out of its spine.

Beautiful post !
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RE: Statue of Zeus of Olympia (a poem video by me)
November 23, 2017 at 3:40 am
(November 22, 2017 at 3:09 pm)Cod Wrote: I was transfixed by your poetry, my eyes didn't venture South, not even once.

Why? What was down there? I have no idea either...Dunno



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RE: Statue of Zeus of Olympia (a poem video by me)
November 23, 2017 at 3:52 am
(November 23, 2017 at 3:13 am)AtlasS33 Wrote: Stone doesn't move; or so people thought until that statue moved.
Twisting its neck, into the dark it looks rumbling the place from floor to roof
The statue might be of stone; but who ever said that stone never cracks?
They always crack with water or plants; they move; so hear me, J A C K.
That poem was art. Beautiful, charming, splendid and fine.
And you were the wind that gave stone a heart;  and blossomed flowers out of its spine.

Beautiful post !

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