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You fell so hard, didn't you? It hurts; doesn't it?
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You fell so hard, didn't you? It hurts; doesn't it?
I came to the exact destined spot to witness the fall
one that is so long, hurts so bad, pains my soul

It's my own doing, I did this to myself and all
made the fuel for it to burn, fed it with wood and coal

Made it burn, and with each blow of flames I fall faster
Faster than the relation between water and stone

Hear my advice: never tell before you think
Sometimes they don't believe you

You will always get hit, fall and scream
But nobody will hear, even if you shout and kick

Suffocated, you know that you have been taken out
but your main enemy, the traitor in this, was yourself

Why, why did you tell?
Why me; what the hell?

Shocked, you look up. To realize in pure surprise
you built the walls, to watch them crumble and fall

You fell so hard, you're a ghost now
so respect your new existence. You're "old news" now.

M -March/18/2018
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