RE: I dreamt that when you die, you end up flying in darkness. But in the midst of it
June 11, 2021 at 8:12 pm
(June 11, 2021 at 8:08 pm)Jackalope Wrote:(June 11, 2021 at 8:06 pm)vulcanlogician Wrote: Am I the only one who thinks the title of this thread (without elaboration from the OP) is actually kind of a decent haiku?
But...the metering is wrong!
Some poets play with the structure. I have a book of haikus and many of them deviate from 5/7/5.