(November 11, 2024 at 2:36 pm)The Architect Of Fate Wrote:(November 11, 2024 at 2:31 pm)Thumpalumpacus Wrote: Holy run-on sentence!Sorry the Translation and Spell checker I used didn't pick up the problem I guess an I just posted copy and pasted it because it said it was good. My bad.
Dude, punctuation is the written equivalent of pausing, taking a breath, raising your voice, changing your inflection, and so on. Use it! It makes it much easier to understand your point.
I made some edits a hope that helps. Again sorry
It's not a huge things, it's just that the English freak in me went all