Outsider's Test of Faith (OTF)

[Zazzy]

** Edit- I know you've been told time and time again that atheists are atheists because they have no beliefs in deities, not because they believe something, but I see you still need to throw that out there. Nevertheless, I'll try a prayer.

Sincerely, that's all I was asking for.

So this morning, I got up, went outside, watched the rising sun, and said this:
"God, if you're there, please help my cousin to overcome her cancer. She's suffering and scared, and I pray for her pain and fear to be less, because even though she's annoying, I love her."

I forgot the "Amen," though, so I'll add it here.

Is that a proper prayer, or did I screw it up?