Please say more. I don't at all see where you're headed. As a piece of writing, I would think the success of the story would depend entirely on your making us care about the character. The twisted plot is clever enough.
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Current time: December 3, 2024, 11:40 pm
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Would a story like this shock anyone I wonder?
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