RE: Ferguson: too much or not enough?
August 21, 2014 at 1:32 pm
Fresh from the "This is America, SPEAK ENGLISH!" crowd:
More racism from Joe the Not Plumber. Beyond the shocking racism of his posts, he presents us with shockingly horrible grammar.
Here is another example of improper use of ellipses. They are employed to indicate a truncated quote or a trail off in a quotation. When you are presenting a solution to a perceived problem, use a colon.
Here's the proper way to structure this racist sentence:
"The best way to ... in Ferguson: Job Fare."
Also "fair" is the description of the justice of something, such as "the way the Bundy Ranch crowd was treated by police stands in stark contrast to the way the Ferguson protesters were treated. This juxtaposition of these two recent protests underscores that the way the police treat people of different racial backgrounds isn't fair."
"Fare" is a the word you would use to describe an event open to the public, such as a "job fare". Of course, perhaps "job fair(ness)" might help but I don't think this is what Joe is calling for.
When you write a sentence, you should really make up your mind whether you're writing a statement or a question. This sentence is structured as a statement (of what is interesting) but ends with a question mark. Either the sentence structure needs to change, such as adding a "don't you think" to the end of it or you need to use a period, consistent with a statement sentence.