Our server costs ~$56 per month to run. Please consider donating or becoming a Patron to help keep the site running. Help us gain new members by following us on Twitter and liking our page on Facebook!
Current time: June 9, 2025, 4:10 am
Atheist Forums › Discussion › Off Topic v
So I wrote a poem..

Thread Rating:
  • 0 Vote(s) - 0 Average
  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
  • 5
Thread Modes
So I wrote a poem..
Homeless Nutter Offline
Senior Member
****
Religious Views: No, thank you.
Posts: 3541
Threads: 0
Joined: January 20, 2015
Reputation: 35
#21
RE: So I wrote a poem..
February 15, 2016 at 4:11 pm
(February 15, 2016 at 3:37 pm)vorlon13 Wrote: I think I want to touch myself
[...]
in the throat
[...]
to induce vomiting

Yeah, right - like you still have a gagging reflex... Tongue
"The fact that a believer is happier than a skeptic is no more to the point than the fact that a drunken man is happier than a sober one." - George Bernard Shaw
Find
Reply
John V Offline
Banned
Religious Views: Christian
Posts: 6851
Threads: 76
Joined: October 17, 2012
Reputation: 31
#22
RE: So I wrote a poem..
February 15, 2016 at 4:21 pm
There once was a writer named pool
Whose poetry stunk like a stool
As he struggled with verse 
He cried with a curse
Fuck! Why am I such a tool?
Find
Reply
Brian37 Offline
RationalPoet
*****
Religious Views: JGH 1933-2017 RIP MOM
Posts: 30726
Threads: 2123
Joined: May 24, 2012
Reputation: 71
#23
RE: So I wrote a poem..
February 15, 2016 at 4:30 pm
(February 15, 2016 at 4:21 pm)alpha male Wrote: There once was a writer named pool
Whose poetry stunk like a stool
As he struggled with verse 
He cried with a curse
Fuck! Why am I such a tool?

Nobody is obligated to care what you personally think.
Poetry by Brian37(poems by an atheist) Also on Facebook as BrianJames Rational Poet and Twitter Brianrrs37  I also have a new blog here at https://www.brianjamesrationalpoet.blog
Find
Reply
Excited Penguin Offline
Retired Soap Salesman
Religious Views: Equanimity
Posts: 9479
Threads: 116
Joined: July 5, 2015
Reputation: 22
#24
RE: So I wrote a poem..
February 15, 2016 at 4:33 pm
(February 15, 2016 at 12:24 pm)Thumpalumpacus Wrote:
(February 15, 2016 at 4:42 am)Excited Penguin Wrote: Very, very bad poem.

He had the guts to post original work. What do you have besides catcalls from the peanut gallery?

Demonstrate your qualifications to critique poetry, by posting poetry you've written. Only then will your opinion have any worth.

I just wanted to say I really appreciate your newfound attitude towards me. Thanks a lot.

Not going to argue with you though, except to tell you you're very wrong, and you make me laugh.
Find
Reply
Athene Offline Donators
Do You See What I See?
*****
Religious Views: N/A
Posts: 5599
Threads: 37
Joined: July 13, 2015
Reputation: 61
#25
RE: So I wrote a poem..
February 15, 2016 at 6:14 pm
(February 15, 2016 at 4:21 pm)alpha male Wrote: There once was a writer named pool
Whose poetry stunk like a stool
As he struggled with verse 
He cried with a curse
Fuck! Why am I such a tool?

Hateful little fucker, aren't you?

Seriously, Bro...do you even Christian?
Find
Reply
Ravenshire Offline Donators
Assassin to (and of) kings.
*****
Religious Views: Purloiner of personal property.
Posts: 8395
Threads: 40
Joined: March 18, 2014
Reputation: 54
#26
RE: So I wrote a poem..
February 15, 2016 at 6:40 pm
(February 15, 2016 at 6:14 pm)Thena323 Wrote:
(February 15, 2016 at 4:21 pm)alpha male Wrote: There once was a writer named pool
Whose poetry stunk like a stool
As he struggled with verse 
He cried with a curse
Fuck! Why am I such a tool?

Hateful little fucker, aren't you?

Seriously, Bro...do you even Christian?

No, he doesn't. Instead, he sits on his high horse and judges those around him.

Er... wait... I guess he do as at that. Big Grin
Thief and assassin for hire. Member in good standing of the Rogues Guild.
Find
Reply
Thumpalumpacus Offline
Outside cat
*****
Religious Views: Alive in the Superunknown
Posts: 24003
Threads: 26
Joined: February 2, 2010
Reputation: 105
#27
RE: So I wrote a poem..
February 15, 2016 at 6:45 pm
(February 15, 2016 at 4:33 pm)Excited Penguin Wrote:
(February 15, 2016 at 12:24 pm)Thumpalumpacus Wrote: He had the guts to post original work. What do you have besides catcalls from the peanut gallery?

Demonstrate your qualifications to critique poetry, by posting poetry you've written. Only then will your opinion have any worth.

I just wanted to say I really appreciate your newfound attitude towards me. Thanks a lot.

Not going to argue with you though, except to tell you you're very wrong, and you make me laugh.

No poems, then? I'm shocked. Surely you have something to offer for our reading pleasure?

Find
Reply
Thumpalumpacus Offline
Outside cat
*****
Religious Views: Alive in the Superunknown
Posts: 24003
Threads: 26
Joined: February 2, 2010
Reputation: 105
#28
RE: So I wrote a poem..
February 15, 2016 at 6:46 pm
(February 15, 2016 at 6:40 pm)The Gentleman Bastard Wrote:
(February 15, 2016 at 6:14 pm)Thena323 Wrote: Hateful little fucker, aren't you?

Seriously, Bro...do you even Christian?

No, he doesn't. Instead, he sits on his high horse and judges those around him.

Er... wait... I guess he do as at that. Big Grin

There's a lot of that going around.

Find
Reply
Excited Penguin Offline
Retired Soap Salesman
Religious Views: Equanimity
Posts: 9479
Threads: 116
Joined: July 5, 2015
Reputation: 22
#29
RE: So I wrote a poem..
February 15, 2016 at 6:56 pm
I no longer write poetry. I don't have as much of a handle on the English language as I used to, to begin with. Maybe I'll write something after taking up reading literature again.
Find
Reply
Brian37 Offline
RationalPoet
*****
Religious Views: JGH 1933-2017 RIP MOM
Posts: 30726
Threads: 2123
Joined: May 24, 2012
Reputation: 71
#30
RE: So I wrote a poem..
February 15, 2016 at 6:57 pm
(February 15, 2016 at 6:14 pm)Thena323 Wrote:
(February 15, 2016 at 4:21 pm)alpha male Wrote: There once was a writer named pool
Whose poetry stunk like a stool
As he struggled with verse 
He cried with a curse
Fuck! Why am I such a tool?

Hateful little fucker, aren't you?

Seriously, Bro...do you even Christian?

Yes they "Christian" , their way, while they forget about the other parts that tell them not to be dicks.
Poetry by Brian37(poems by an atheist) Also on Facebook as BrianJames Rational Poet and Twitter Brianrrs37  I also have a new blog here at https://www.brianjamesrationalpoet.blog
Find
Reply


Atheist Forums › Discussion › Off Topic v
So I wrote a poem..

Possibly Related Threads...
Thread Author Replies Views Last Post
  Just wanted to share something I wrote because I'm feeling kind of down WisdomOfTheTrees 1 1068 April 23, 2017 at 9:11 am
Last Post: Athene
  I wanted to share a blog post I wrote recently WisdomOfTheTrees 12 3136 February 8, 2017 at 7:50 pm
Last Post: Nine
  pool wrote another poem :) Criticism welcome :) ErGingerbreadMandude 0 818 November 30, 2016 at 10:10 am
Last Post: ErGingerbreadMandude
  Poem About Communication Rhondazvous 0 646 September 1, 2015 at 3:41 pm
Last Post: Rhondazvous
  Darkness at the arch (A story I wrote) Lemonvariable72 28 7738 November 1, 2013 at 3:31 pm
Last Post: Doubting Thomas
  An actual letter my friend wrote on my behalf Pel 24 9890 January 30, 2012 at 8:43 am
Last Post: Mitja
  {Poem} Nevermore Tails Turrosaki 12 6144 November 20, 2009 at 4:47 pm
Last Post: Amphora



Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)