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Been working on a new novel.
#21
RE: Been working on a new novel.
(April 25, 2016 at 3:43 am)Maelstrom Wrote: No, it is not sarcasm.

So then:


Quote:Your entire first paragraph was nonsense, you are welcome.

No, the doctor character was not accepting of him.  You should hone your reading comprehension.  If you only got that she is a blond, that is further proof you need further reading comprehension skills.  Wow, you are not a reader at all.

Why the hell would I describe such inane things such as the smell of one's sweat?  Clearly, you know as little of critique as you do of reading.  

And some of those later questions are not appropriate because perhaps later some things are explained.  After all, it cannot all be laid our(sic) for you in one chapter.  It is a novel for a reason.

Your trolling me?

I don't understand why you'd want me to read more when you have no regard for my ability to read...
"I'm thick." - Me
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#22
RE: Been working on a new novel.
By all means read, yet also expect an honest response from an author.
"Never trust a fox. Looks like a dog, behaves like a cat."
~ Erin Hunter
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#23
RE: Been working on a new novel.
(April 25, 2016 at 3:59 am)Maelstrom Wrote: By all means read, yet also expect an honest response from an author.

See that's just it, I think your just being a troll. So I'm out.
"I'm thick." - Me
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#24
RE: Been working on a new novel.
Wow xD Very well, then.
"Never trust a fox. Looks like a dog, behaves like a cat."
~ Erin Hunter
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#25
RE: Been working on a new novel.
Very, very bad writing, full of grammar mistakes and terrible narration in general. I give this one a 0 out 100.


I would like you to apologize for wasting my time.
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#26
RE: Been working on a new novel.
Just published Chapter Four.

https://www.wattpad.com/252585266-kitan-chapter-four
"Never trust a fox. Looks like a dog, behaves like a cat."
~ Erin Hunter
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#27
RE: Been working on a new novel.
Chapter Five has been published:

https://www.wattpad.com/255749840-kitan-chapter-five
"Never trust a fox. Looks like a dog, behaves like a cat."
~ Erin Hunter
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#28
RE: Been working on a new novel.
Just read first chapter. I don't mind your style (I hate too many details), but I'm not sure if I'll read further. I just wanted to see if your writing really was as terrible as those two posters make it out to be.
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#29
RE: Been working on a new novel.
Will check it out later.

I've been reading "Mother Of Learning" religiously, it's also fiction and somewhat supernatural, it's by no means flawless but it is very interesting so maybe it will give you some ideas.
https://www.fictionpress.com/s/2961893/1...f-Learning
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#30
RE: Been working on a new novel.
Here is Chapter Six
"Never trust a fox. Looks like a dog, behaves like a cat."
~ Erin Hunter
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