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Warm as a love poem she greeted me
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RE: Warm as a love poem she greeted me
(November 20, 2019 at 11:29 am)Brian37 Wrote:
(November 20, 2019 at 10:47 am)AtlasS33 Wrote: Warm as a love poem she greeted me
Straight up and magnificent she contained me

With a kiss followed by a hug
So warm it regenerated my luck

Her enthusiasm made me stuck
Loving and caring she let the worse pass

She  kissed the ghosts out
Made me wish for the soil under her feet

Her bed sheets her pillow
Her warm smile her morning hello

I have to admit, this is one of your better submissions.

But dude, seriously, hormones are a cluster fuck.

I know exactly what you felt in typing this poem. 

Ann McCarthy was a cheerleader in my youth that I pined after, chased and was ultimately rejected by. 

But I do get it. You see someone you are attracted to, and hope that they feel the same way. Realty isn't like that.

But what "if" they felt the same way about you even for once?

(November 20, 2019 at 11:32 am)Rhizomorph13 Wrote: I think this poem is about his girlfriend so he probably knows that she feels the same way about him.

This one line says it all, "Her warm smile her morning hello"

That hello probably didn't happen because he drove over there to have breakfast...

...if you know what I mean

The 'hello' happened; for so long too.

(November 20, 2019 at 4:33 pm)Fake Messiah Wrote: What about my poem?


When I saw her burqa I thought my vest exploded but it was my heart.

She made me walk dizzy like untrained pilot in a cockpit that lost his smart.

When I slammed into her we both went down in flames and dust.

And now, because of love, in Abu Ghraib I must rust.

Upgrade your xenophobic racist vocabulary..Abu Ghuraib is as old as 2003
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RE: Warm as a love poem she greeted me
(November 21, 2019 at 2:29 am)AtlasS33 Wrote: Upgrade your xenophobic racist vocabulary..Abu Ghuraib is as old as 2003

Abu Ghraib was built in 1950 by Muslims for Muslims, so now I am a racist for mentioning a Muslim institution?

Also when you write a love poem in Muslim Gulf country shouldn't you include in it that a woman wears a burqa? That she is one of many women/ wives this man will have in his polygamous relationship and also that couples meet there by arrangement and not free will? Not to mention that they're cousins who yield sick progeny.

 So your poem should realistically look something like this:


Born in our tribe she greeted me
Set up in the marriage she is my cousin

She being a kinswoman made our kids sick
But who cares I have another two to fill a week

Her ass is always full of soil
Since her incest past took its toil

She kisses our kid as it turns to ghost
Incest marriage makes her womb a bad host
teachings of the Bible are so muddled and self-contradictory that it was possible for Christians to happily burn heretics alive for five long centuries. It was even possible for the most venerated patriarchs of the Church, like St. Augustine and St. Thomas Aquinas, to conclude that heretics should be tortured (Augustine) or killed outright (Aquinas). Martin Luther and John Calvin advocated the wholesale murder of heretics, apostates, Jews, and witches. - Sam Harris, "Letter To A Christian Nation"
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RE: Warm as a love poem she greeted me
(November 21, 2019 at 8:14 am)Fake Messiah Wrote:
(November 21, 2019 at 2:29 am)AtlasS33 Wrote: Upgrade your xenophobic racist vocabulary..Abu Ghuraib is as old as 2003

Abu Ghraib was buil...

You should know by now that this is how I see xenophobic racist views. Did you actually think that I care about such an opinion?
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RE: Warm as a love poem she greeted me
(November 21, 2019 at 10:00 am)AtlasS33 Wrote:
(November 21, 2019 at 8:14 am)Fake Messiah Wrote: Abu Ghraib was buil...

You should know by now that this is how I see xenophobic racist views. Did you actually think that I care about such an opinion?

I'm not the one who is xenophobic but Muslims are xenophobic to the point that they are willing to have seriously sick children and then grown people who suffer their whole lives, just so that they wouldn't have to marry people of other Muslim denominations, not to mention other religions.

From wikipedia

Quote:Traditionally, in Saudi Arabia (and other Gulf countries), families arrange marriages with the tribe or family's considerations in mind, rather than Western/modern ideas of romantic love and self-identity. Sons and daughters have been encouraged to "marry cousins or other relatives in order to increase and strengthen" the extended family or tribe, "or occasionally to marry into another tribe in order to heal rifts". At least in the 1990s, most marriages in Saudi were "consanguineous"—i.e. between close relatives—sometimes a second cousin but usually a first cousin and marriage between cousins in Saudi is among the highest rate in the world. The practice has been cited as a factor in higher rates of Type 2 diabetes, (which affects about 32% of adult Saudis), hypertension, (which affects 33%), and higher rates of severe genetic diseases like cystic fibrosis or a blood disorder, thalassemia, sickle cell anemia, spinal muscular atrophy, deafness and muteness. As a consequence of frequent consanguineous marriage, genetic counseling is a growing field in Saudi Arabia.[Genetic counseling! Forget about that. Why don't you go to Israel and marry some Jews there? Oh yeah, you are xenophobic]

Traditionally men having more than one wife (polygyny) was "fairly common"

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Culture_...a#Marriage
teachings of the Bible are so muddled and self-contradictory that it was possible for Christians to happily burn heretics alive for five long centuries. It was even possible for the most venerated patriarchs of the Church, like St. Augustine and St. Thomas Aquinas, to conclude that heretics should be tortured (Augustine) or killed outright (Aquinas). Martin Luther and John Calvin advocated the wholesale murder of heretics, apostates, Jews, and witches. - Sam Harris, "Letter To A Christian Nation"
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RE: Warm as a love poem she greeted me
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(November 21, 2019 at 11:58 am)Fake Messiah Wrote:
(November 21, 2019 at 10:00 am)AtlasS33 Wrote: You should know by now that this is how I see xenophobic racist views. Did you actually think that I care about such an opinion?

I'm not the one who is xenophobic but Muslims are xenophobic to the point that they are willing to have seriously sick children and then grown people who suffer their whole lives, just so that they wouldn't have to marry people of other Muslim denominations, not to mention other religions.

From wikipedia

Quote:Tradit...
Please understand:
1-The chronological order of what happened to you now is that you got filtered/black listed in my head as a "xenophobe" who proved to carry ambiguous racist thoughts worthy of any right wing stereotype.
2-You post things that have nothing to do with the OP which make you a troll.
3-You are not here to discuss; you are here to practice "kafir reverse-Jihad" against any Muslim you see; and just like Jihadists you are just a negative carbon-copy of them; even worse; I mean you're a racist xenophobe after all
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