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Poll: On a scale of 1-5 how lame is it?
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Did you spend like 1 minute on this?
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Doesn't sound very good.
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It was ok you tried.
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Good but could be better.
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My Biggest Fail Ever....
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My Biggest Fail Ever....
Lol lately ive been hangin out with this girl thats 22, Im 19 so my game wasn't gettin very far then I decided to sing her this song. Don't know what the outcome is she just said it was cute and funny, so pretty sure I failed but ohwell I tried. Yes I call her a lioness.. Rawr!! im wierd anyways hope you think it's funny. Tongue [last 2:33 seconds] some typos

ps. her nick is g-rizz

[Beat]
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=79R5MLHo0L8

[Lyrics] Created by me..
SHEEP V.S. LIONESS

Yo let me tell you what's up, with this girl, G-rizzle
She got a body so hot, when she walks, the air sizzle's
She got a smile so bright, it outshine's the moon at night
Never met a girl before, who could glow like a light
And when you look in her eye's, it put's everything right
Tell her not to do something, and she'll do it despite
There's no telling how far, in this world she will climb
Before she reaches the top, I hope that she would be mine
She could be leading me astray and I would follow her blind
She could be ditching me for good and I'll be waiting behind

Dont know what this feeling is but I know it's sublime
It's got me thinking off the top of my head creating rhyme's
But I havent done this before, and so im hoping it's tight
Getting it all off my head, so I'll sleep better tonight

[Break]

But this is just a sad song, from sad sad sheep
That be chasing the lioness, biting her with his teeth
Had to put my thoughts on paper, she make's harder to speak
And if she hit's me low, well you know you sowe what you reap
Jumping at the lioness, with the retractable claws
And if I lose this, there's no telling how far I might fall
But Im a brave sheep, standing proud, and standing tall
Throwing my heart at this rhyme, so im risking it all
But If I intend to grow, I know talk is too cheap
And at the end this song, hope I don't come off as a creep

Dont know what this feeling is but I know it's sublime
It's got me thinking off the top of my head creating rhyme's
But I havent done this before, and so im hoping it's tight
Getting it all off my head, so I'll sleep better tonight

[Break]

I know this is cliche, so it may sound pitiful
But never have I met a girl that looked so beutiful
Inside and out, one of a kind without a doubt
Stupid fool is what id be If I decided not to shout
Hoping she'll smile, and not give me a frown
The only risk was she might not ever wana hang around
Tired of looking lonely, like a depressed clown
And so im changing my life and attitude completely upside down
We reached the end of the song, and the sheep might be losin
But it's up to the lioness to choose the final conclusion

Dont know what this feeling is but I know it's sublime
It's got me thinking off the top of my head creating rhyme's
But I havent done this before, and so im hoping it's tight
Getting it all off my head, so I'll sleep better tonight

Dont know what this feeling is but I know it's sublime
It's got me thinking off the top of my head creating rhyme's
But I havent done this before, and so im hoping it's tight
Got it all off my head, so everything is alright
Live every day as if already dead, that way you're not disappointed when you are. Big Grin
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#2
RE: My Biggest Fail Ever....
I'm both a fatalist and a perfectionist.

It could have been worse, and you aren't about to impress me.

But hell... I'd like it if someone at least tried to sing such things to me.
Please give me a home where cloud buffalo roam
Where the dear and the strangers can play
Where sometimes is heard a discouraging word
But the skies are not stormy all day
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#3
RE: My Biggest Fail Ever....
(June 17, 2011 at 4:09 am)Aerzia Saerules Arktuos Wrote: I'm both a fatalist and a perfectionist.

It could have been worse, and you aren't about to impress me.

But hell... I'd like it if someone at least tried to sing such things to me.

I like honest people, it was my first attempt to rap to a girl.
Live every day as if already dead, that way you're not disappointed when you are. Big Grin
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#4
RE: My Biggest Fail Ever....
Make it your last.
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#5
RE: My Biggest Fail Ever....
(June 17, 2011 at 1:33 pm)5thHorseman Wrote: Make it your last.

He'll never get better if he doesn't push himself.

It's like starcraft... you start the game. And you suck.

But you are Korean, so you're going to try again, and this time you do better.

A year from now you win a Golden Mouse and your APM is 812.
Please give me a home where cloud buffalo roam
Where the dear and the strangers can play
Where sometimes is heard a discouraging word
But the skies are not stormy all day
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#6
RE: My Biggest Fail Ever....
Honestly. I think to have the confidence to attempt a rap is commendable. And i'm pretty sure women in general love men who put in effort and have the guts to attempt it. Kudos sir.
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#7
RE: My Biggest Fail Ever....
I think they're good lyrics. Rapping to a girl isn't exactly what i'd call romantic. But i'm single, so what do I know?
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#8
RE: My Biggest Fail Ever....
(June 17, 2011 at 2:28 pm)Napoleon Wrote: I think they're good lyrics. Rapping to a girl isn't exactly what i'd call romantic. But i'm single, so what do I know?

To give it a shot next time? Smile Nothing ventured: little gained.
Please give me a home where cloud buffalo roam
Where the dear and the strangers can play
Where sometimes is heard a discouraging word
But the skies are not stormy all day
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#9
RE: My Biggest Fail Ever....
(June 17, 2011 at 2:30 pm)Aerzia Saerules Arktuos Wrote: To give it a shot next time? Smile Nothing ventured: little gained.

Something Ventured: Major Embarrassment and Psychological trauma for the rest of my life Big Grin
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#10
RE: My Biggest Fail Ever....
(June 17, 2011 at 2:37 pm)Napoleon Wrote:
(June 17, 2011 at 2:30 pm)Aerzia Saerules Arktuos Wrote: To give it a shot next time? Smile Nothing ventured: little gained.

Something Ventured: Major Embarrassment and Psychological trauma for the rest of my life Big Grin

Which is of course why I was hoping you'd video it for me. I could use a good laugh.

All the better at someone's expense Tiger
Please give me a home where cloud buffalo roam
Where the dear and the strangers can play
Where sometimes is heard a discouraging word
But the skies are not stormy all day
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