Would a story like this shock anyone I wonder?

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Ah OK, wow it looks like I just confused everyone, I'm sorry. Maybe this was a bad idea

It's meant to be an analogy with religion, but I wanted it to be enough removed for theists to given an opinion on this and then apply it to religion. Maybe I should just forgot this, if I explain it any further it would defeat the point of it. But I was looking for theists to reply really, but didn't put it in the religious section in case they found it offensive or something. Maybe that was stupid. I'm not at my best today! I was also interested in what atheists thought of my analogy though.

But thanks for your replies, sorry I didn't mean to mess you around Hey it could be a good short story though...

I'm happy about the extra interpretations I got! I have always been looking to write a story but never thought I could get a good enough idea. Maybe trying to spin the rapist as a good guy could be the challenge of the book.

You know how something seemed like a good idea at the time... If this just falls flat I'll explain what I was talking about.