Chriatian Phoenix's Deadlt Rant

[jackson]

Try one last time, It's one of a handful of fairytales I know from religion,Christ and the 12 apostles? Is that spelt right? Have never written that word before. Anyway my experience of organised religion doesn't pass the day my penis was trimmed ,my name was made official and my god parents were named, mum ,dad and all other adults would have then gotten way pissed end of my religious upbringing. So I used this story and admit that my knowledge of even this story is vague, I'm a construction work who thru injury found writting

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And yes I did blame my phone for sounding like an idiot, it is my first script and I still have to work on writting It's synopsis, chopping the long entail story into like a hundred words , giving away enough but not too much, plus the fact that I can't stand to read or write makes me an ignorant fool in written form , but I don't lack imagination,
So my question again is would you watch something like this movie , and what I have heard back is ,are you drunk stupid or both and that is fine , the obvious Christians on the movie forum last week , claimed that atheists are wouldn't watch such a film ,guess he was correct , I like to laugh ,read a book yeah sure ,I'll watch 10 maybe more movies and my one life ,my only life is filled , ps I'm an idiot and this post probably backs your claims .
Pps

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And yes I did blame my phone for sounding like an idiot, it is my first script and I still have to work on writting It's synopsis, chopping the long entail story into like a hundred words , giving away enough but not too much, plus the fact that I can't stand to read or write makes me an ignorant fool in written form , but I don't lack imagination,
So my question again is would you watch something like this movie , and what I have heard back is ,are you drunk stupid or both and that is fine , the obvious Christians on the movie forum last week , claimed that atheists are wouldn't watch such a film ,guess he was correct , I like to laugh ,read a book yeah sure ,I'll watch 10 maybe more movies and my one life ,my only life is filled , ps I'm an idiot and this post probably backs your claims .
Pps

[robvalue]

OK man. It was very hard to tell what your actual point was, or whether you were being serious. And when you ask "do atheists have a sense of humour", I don't understand what you can be thinking. Was that a serious question? What makes you possibly think they wouldn't?

[downbeatplumb]

Why would he walk hundred of kilometers just to start a new job? Couldn't he take a bus or drive? What speed is he walking? Was he, perhaps carrying a one pound coconut for a swallow?

African or European?

[jackson]

Australia ,to the outback It's like a Forrest Gump type moment, plus a common practice of indigenous males plus google 's only answer on getting to said town ,is to drive or hitch hike .

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And his cars been destroyed along with worldly possessions (life savinga included). Should he sit on his arse and pray or be proactive.

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That native practice is actually called going walk abouts, croc Dundee was a fan ,the wife not so much , basically a leisurely stroll , poking around to see what's going on .. By wife I meant participants wife stuck at home with no idea of return date .

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All this comes as a result of networking a movie , by (this) I mean forums ,I was invited to my first forum in December, a script writting site , where I was notified that because I had dared conceive this concept, that I was sure to go ,straight down stairs. Then was informed that even Atheists would be appalled. I told said people that Atheists aren't humorless and could accept this concept in a fictional movie , more burn in hells and such ,a positive post in regards to protagonists name and a suggestion to visit Atheist forum. Now here the idiot is.

[jackson]

I would like to thank the one person that broke down and quoted me, shows you took time to read the premise if only to point out how stupidly it was written, that rabbit guy is that a religious thing ,as rabbits are in plague proportions in said location and could easily end up as road kill. Bottomless cask of wine , when the young girl drinks from it as they walk as a group thru hot as ,outback of Australian water is always distributed, with the adults as they drink it from morning till dusk ,they receive water ,come night time beer and wine.

[robvalue]

I doubt many atheists would be appalled, and I reckon many would happily laugh along with something that trashes and defiles religion and so on. I spend a lot of time cursing and laughing at every aspect of religion. I don't have much of a high opinion of people who freak out just at the mention of certain things in a story.

Welcome to the forum, sorry we got off on a shaky start

[The Grand Nudger]

@Darkstar
-durka durka kat-, far cuter in pictures than in person.

Should he sit on his arse and pray or be proactive.

look at the bones!

[Thackerie]

I am new to this forum and am also new to this shitty phone that I'm posting from.,so my ramblings have been seemingly idiotic, my point being now that I have intact wast0ed time writting a movie (you know the gist already) "I'm aware there are spelling errors ,but am not going back to fix them, that's infact and wasted" and the protagonist goes on a walk as his new job starts in a couple of months and his car was destroyed by fire , while walking saving 12 people who kow find themselves thru circumstance able to simply. Follow our protagonist ...there's re
d vine ...animals selfishly providing themselves as sustainance ,.. bread falling from trucks ..(not going back selflessly"as destroyed by fire

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F this phone sorry to all.

Nope. Still doesn't make any sense. Go drunk; you're home.

[Fidel_Castronaut]

Yeah I'm not really getting any of this either.

[Nope]

I would like to thank the one person that broke down and quoted me, shows you took time to read the premise if only to point out how stupidly it was written, that rabbit guy is that a religious thing ,as rabbits are in plague proportions in said location and could easily end up as road kill. Bottomless cask of wine , when the young girl drinks from it as they walk as a group thru hot as ,outback of Australian water is always distributed, with the adults as they drink it from morning till dusk ,they receive water ,come night time beer and wine.

I wasn't trying to make you sound stupid but I was having a little fun at your expense. Keep writing. Your premise isn't bad as it has a very surreal quality to it that could actually be very funny if done correctly. You need to work on your sentence structure a bit so that people can understand you.

I like to write and am, sadly, somewhat of a failed writer as I have been rejected by the best agents. LOL So, I know the pain of having your work picked apart.